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-1 Holding me back by ~rickona:iconrickona:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


I知 not the smartest
Or the strongest
Or the fastest
Or the bravest
I知 not the prettiest
Or the cleverest
Or the toughest
Or the best at anything
There may be tears in my eyes
And scars on my soul
But this is me
And there is nothing to be done about it.
This is me.
And Damn It,
Nothing is going to hold me back.
©2007-2009 ~rickona
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Author's Comments

This is my introduction to the 100's thing.

I think I promised a drawing or something but today brought up some issues and these are my feelings. I am not a strong person, and I have a low self confidence. These are my innermost thoughts on the events of today.
This new year, nothing and no one, not even myself, will hold me back.

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*Koeryn Jan 1, 2007, 4:01:37 PM
I'm glad I took the time to read this (I honestly don't tend to read much literature on dA). Well done, and I know that you can do it :)

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"Sometimes the best solution to a problem is grabbing it by the throat and giving a hard twist."
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~rickona Jan 1, 2007, 4:08:10 PM
I'm glad you took the time to read it too :hug: And to comment!! * double :hug: *
Its really a pitty that literature on DA doesn't get much notice.

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I blame the sky for being cold, I blame the ocean for being deep, I blame humanity for being cruel. But the only thing I will ever blame you for, is never letting me kiss you…
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~Hobo-Bobo Jan 1, 2007, 5:42:10 PM
I can completely relate to this poem. This is really well written and I'm sure you can do this. Good luck!

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Knowledge pursues me but I am faster.
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~rickona Jan 1, 2007, 6:32:59 PM
thank you. At first it wasn't much more than a collection of words and thoughts and feelings, but they seemed to just order themselves. It (as you can probably see) has many applications.

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I blame the sky for being cold, I blame the ocean for being deep, I blame humanity for being cruel. But the only thing I will ever blame you for, is never letting me kiss you…
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~NJKay Jan 1, 2007, 6:39:59 PM
Ah! :hug: I want you to know that I think you're one of the best people in the world! And I love this poem! It really had good feeling in it. The rythmn was wonderful and the ending just brillant. You always do know just how to end them.

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~Hobo-Bobo Jan 1, 2007, 8:27:53 PM
It's really interesting how even though you were distraught (it seems) that your thoughts still were rather organized...

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Knowledge pursues me but I am faster.
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~rickona Jan 1, 2007, 8:30:25 PM
lol, tis just how my mind works I would guess.

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I blame the sky for being cold, I blame the ocean for being deep, I blame humanity for being cruel. But the only thing I will ever blame you for, is never letting me kiss you…
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~rickona Jan 1, 2007, 8:31:22 PM
thank you K.
I rather liked this one. And I just love that ending, it was my mantra today.

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I blame the sky for being cold, I blame the ocean for being deep, I blame humanity for being cruel. But the only thing I will ever blame you for, is never letting me kiss you…
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~renia-vandolrin Jan 1, 2007, 8:54:24 PM
Good job Mel. You are the best writer and do let anyone tell you otherwise. ;)

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Just like a photograph, love develops in darkness

You can't always get what you want, even if your heart is crying to have it
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